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I need you


I need you,
In every way possible,
It's nearly impossible,
For me to forget you.

I need you,
Since you said goodbye,
And left without telling why,
I've been empty.

I need you,
Like the sun needs rain,
To soothe away the pain,
Of loneliness.

I need you,
Because life isnt great,
And it suddenly filled with hate,
When you left us.

I need you,
To tell me why you went,
And tell me why you spent,
So many days without me.

I need you,
Cos' I need someone here,
To tell me not to shed tears,
And cheer me up.

I need you,
So I can tell you right now,
That I need you (and how!),
And I love you.


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Haven't submitted much lately, decided to write a SasuSaku Poem xDDD

Set after everyoen comes back from the Village of the Star. (So about 4-5 weeks after Sasuke left)

This is Sakura's POV.

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto
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mimiandsocky Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2010
so damn sad :(
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kikyo9333 Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2009
xD so sad
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sasusaku4ever95 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2008
damn... i havent cried for about a year and this poem made me cry good job
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SaskiaSama Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2008
great poem! I wish i wrote half as well as you do, then maybe I would be getting a better grade in english ;P
:+favlove:
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NHNTKISTGMSSKH Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2008
So sad...:cries: best couple...out of people i hate...well Sakura's cool in the Shippuden...But I like Sasuke better BEFORE he goes with mister snakey-dude...me know like mister snakey -dude...he is creepy!!!!!!!!! And u know, there is proof that Sasuke cares about Sakura...U KNOW IT!!!
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KugaSasu Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
*SOB* this is just beautiful!!!! i love it! its simply astounding!!
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chipmunks4u Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2008
NICE!!!
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Kyo-kohei Featured By Owner Jun 20, 2008
how cute^^ really
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cooliset Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2008
Awww. That was sad and somehow so.. filled with emotions. So great. Love
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sakuraharuno998 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2008
That was a really good poem.
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Kataang-furuba Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2008
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :tears: I LOVE to cry!
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dreammaker08 Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2008
It's so sweet and wonderful! ^_^
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ChhkzFan Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2008
so much love...
so cute...
so sad...
(mixed emotions) nice poem :happycry:
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gracefulstrawberries Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2008  Student General Artist
awsum.
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Sakura-Katana Featured By Owner Sep 25, 2007
Great Job!! I really like it! =)

:+fav:
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Infidel-Imperial Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2007
Haha maaaan... It's been ages since I even thought of writing poetry...
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zylimpin Featured By Owner May 18, 2006
beautiful..:clap::dance:
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deathmetal99 Featured By Owner May 19, 2006   Photographer
thanks ^^
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zylimpin Featured By Owner May 20, 2006
:giggle: no prob..XD
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shessyluvsrin Featured By Owner May 17, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
Wow that is pretty!
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deathmetal99 Featured By Owner May 18, 2006   Photographer
thanks ^^
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shessyluvsrin Featured By Owner May 18, 2006  Hobbyist Photographer
Great writting
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KakashiChaos Featured By Owner May 14, 2006
*applause* beautiful!!!!!!!!!!! :hug:
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deathmetal99 Featured By Owner May 14, 2006   Photographer
hahaha xDD Just something quick I thought up ^^
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KakashiChaos Featured By Owner May 15, 2006
hahahahahahaha well u sure did a good job...
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deathmetal99 Featured By Owner May 15, 2006   Photographer
did not!
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KakashiChaos Featured By Owner May 16, 2006
yes you did! you know you did so good that you don't wnt to admit it b/c u love that attention. :nod:
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deathmetal99 Featured By Owner May 16, 2006   Photographer
huh?

No i actually do think my stuff is crap xD
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KakashiChaos Featured By Owner May 16, 2006
but others don't... like me! C=
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deathmetal99 Featured By Owner May 17, 2006   Photographer
thanks ^_^
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living4him Featured By Owner May 13, 2006
beautiful writing :clap:
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deathmetal99 Featured By Owner May 14, 2006   Photographer
thanks ^^
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living4him Featured By Owner May 14, 2006
you're very welcome
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